In recent years, many small local shops have closet because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Recently, many shopping centers have opened in many areas, as a result of which small shop closures have become very common. While it is true that the trend towards the small shops closing and shopping malls opening more often brings some problems, in my view, this is a change for the better overall.
The drawbacks that come with small shop closures in the area are clear to see. First of all, local residents who own and run shops have inevitably lost their jobs. As a result, there are very few job opportunities available in many neighborhoods. In addition, local people are already having difficulties making instant purchases, as there are no shops open close to their homes. However, this troubles are temporary and not very significant.
Having said that, this development benefits society more than it harms. The number-one advantage is that big shopping malls offer a wider range of products than small shops. That is to say, these huge stores tend to have sections dedicated to each product with different variety, whereas small stores offer only the most common items. Secondly, products available in shopping centers tend to be cheaper than their small shop counterparts. This is because, big malls often buy items in bulk , thus lowering their costs. Therefore, it can be argued that the benefits we get from these centers are greater.
To sum up, despite some minor problems, such as short-term loss of jobs and challenges of buying items instantaneously, I believe the increase in the number of shopping malls has brought enormous benefits for consumers. Thus, we should oppose this change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cause, big malls often buy items in bulk , thus lowering their costs. Therefore, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in my view, it is true, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07518796992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58558832991 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8173756918 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35899931136 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119136469972 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818030211738 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219144234013 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829999837882 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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