Describe a trip you have been on
Last month, I had a trip to Sapa with my mum and my brother. It's the first time I have been to Sapa, so I was looking forward to expecting and enjoying. The night before I geared up for everything and went to bed early. In the morning, we got up early, ate breakfast and departed at 4am. We had lunch in Lao Cai and showed up to Sapa about 3pm. Because I got motion sickness, I slept during the trip so when I got off the bus I was very tired. Therefore, my mum checked in to the hotel so as to rest. At 19 o'clock we have dinner at restaurant, after we take a walk about 30 minutes in park, and go to night market. It's crowded and hetic there. I have eaten a lot of street food, I am most impressed with the chestnut cake. I'm into it. I don't want to go hotel at all. But a clock strikes 11pm, I have to go to my room.
The next day, we went to Cat Cat village to visit and buy souvenirs which is located in Muong Hoa valley. I'm very impressed because the air in village is much fresher than in the city. There are many flowers here, I don't know many flowers but they are very beautiful. I really loved it and took picture a lot, I posted a lot of photos on Instagram and Facebook story. The scenery here is very majestic with mountains and forests. The people in the village are very friendly, they recommended a lot of places to us and told a lot about this place. How wonderful!
Two days later, we climbed to the top of Fansipan, very tired but also very happy because it's the first time we experienced the cable car. Next, we went to the "Cầu kính Rồng Mây", I was scared because the bridge was transparent and very high, I was worried because I thought it might be broken and I fell down there. It was an interesting experience.
The last day we went to the food market, I ate a lot of specialties such as "thắng cố", buffalo meat, "cơm lam"… This food is tastes good. I love it. The fruit here is also fresh. My mother buys a lot of plums, oranges and chestnuts too. Then, we went back to hotel, check out and came back to Hai Phong. I was over the moon the trip. If I have money and time, I hope I can come back here again.
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