Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A variety of citizens are holding the belief that not private entities but the nation’s authorities should be the one and only organizations having the right to conduct scientific inquiries. From my personal standpoint, I would take side with this opinion due to the following reason.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that a majority of research conducted by non-governmental firms are mainly for the purpose of supporting their product sales or business operation. Hence, not only it is difficult for corporations to remain impartial in these circumstances but they also skew the truth and manipulate results with the aim of achieving commercial interests. In the case of a Vietnamese medical company in 2015, the deficiency in financial budget led them to the verge of carrying out probe with inadequate trials. The flawed results then be publicly stated in the way that is favourable for the firm’s goal to create monetary gain. Thanks to the intervention of the government at that time, innocent users are protected against this inhuman action.
The second point that should be taken into consideration is that government - as a nonprofit-driven institution, would have the ability to allocate a considerable amount of the nation’s expenditure for scientific inquiry. The nation’ top tiers university and skillful scientists would be those in charge of conducting high-quality research aiming at the sake of society. Given such strict supervision and proper management methods, only unbiased and neutral results are presented to the public.
In a nutshell, it is my belief that scientific research should be strictly monitored and operated only by the nation’s authority to produce the best outcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42007434944 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13632638765 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9664924039 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166318987687 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564639978075 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490756263455 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103389598892 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195588101452 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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