More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?
these day, people tend to have a diet food and work out on a from numerous health problems. People more and more to eat healthy meals with their family and do sports on a daily basis due to the fact that they wanna improve their health as well as keeping fit. In this essay, i would give many ways to encourage people have diet food and do work out frequently.
On the one hand, there are an abundance of reasons why people regularly have health food and work out. In the first place, during spread covid 19, people have experienced a lot of symptoms after having covid. Therefore, people are likely to eat healthy food, like eat more vegetables and do sports, namely football or skateboarding, it offers them to enhance their healthy and maintain a healthy lifestyle. To take my self as a demonstration, 2 years ago, i often ate fast food, namly hamburger or sanwid and stayed at home to watch films and play video games however after I having covid 19, I took up changing my daily routine, In a day I usually eat a lots vegetables and in the evening, i will go for a walk with my mom, sometimes, I play football with my buddy in stadium.
On the other hand, there are many approaches to encourage citizens to have a diet food and do sports frequently. To begin with, the authorities are expected to encourage residents and raise their awareness about health. Furthermore, the government should equip with sports equipment for people to do exercise. To take my neighborhood as an example, the park near my house is equipped with a lot of physical equiment, which is convenient and it allows people could do work out in a daily routine. In addition, television station should be created programs how to become well-built, it is a motivation and innovation for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62025316456 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64486545047 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1841245492 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232402190447 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908410628385 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695387421474 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168378892091 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586354436872 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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