Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Today, international tourism is thriving dramatically in the world. Unlucky, it gives rise to anxiety rather than understanding between people from other civilizations. I utterly disagree with this view and believe that it helps to bridge the gap between countries such as boosting the economy of the country, and expand the knowledge about other countries.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that traveling to other countries brings harmony, fraternity and love across nations such as helping to promote the development of economy. In reality, international tourism creates an employment opportunity to the local people. Additionally, it is undoubted that some visitor need the tour guides, who will eliminate the tension, anxiety and unexpected conflict. A good example of this is Sa Pa in Viet Nam, being the best places to live and being the appealing destination for foreigner. An empirical research show that all visitors feel wonderful when being there. Hence, international tourism brings benefits than tension.
In addition, the development of oversea tourism industry helps visitor to enlarge their insights about a new civilization. In the fact that there are a lot of gorgeous lands over the world. Without exaggeration that the happiness is perhaps the discovery of a beautiful landscape and organized tour to other countries make people happier when comprehending a new culture. Furthermore, spending a few weeks in other civilizations is not adequate to gain a proper understanding of a different culture. But, this problem can be radically confronted by tour guides who help visitors to unwind and explain cultural and traditional local traits.
In conclusion, I do not completely concur with this opinion. From my perspective, international tourism brings benefits for foreigner such expanding their understanding. Moreover, it helps develop quickly the economy of the country. Tension is fully tackled by tour guides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11177691288 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.151459788 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29001208647 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885379811211 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802498264678 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178984431433 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611592560724 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.