The supplied chart gives information about the British industrial personnel distribution in various fields in the years of 1841 and 2011.
Overall, it is clear that all industries experienced a considerable change in employment throughout the period, especially those in services, manufacturing and agriculture/fishing. Manufacturing were surpassed its position as the dominant industry in 1841 by services. With the exception of these two industries, agriculture/fishing, construction and energy/water had a lower share.
In 1841, the number of employees working in services accounted for a third, however that percentage had substantially increased to 81%, which is the highest amount of employees in 2011. Manufacturing and agriculture/fishing, on the other hand, suffered a major fall during the period. Manufacturing accounted for 36% of workers in 1841 and reduced to a quarter in the year of 2011. Besides agriculture/fishing dropped to 1% from 22% of staffs at the beginning.
In both years, the remaining industrial lines had a steady trend in addition to the aforementioned fluctuations, accounting for little under 10% of all UK employments. While construction reported a minor growth of 3%, for 5% to 8%, the workforce in energy/water declined by 2%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: Except; Except for
... dominant industry in 1841 by services. With the exception of these two industries, agriculture/fishi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, so, third, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65968586387 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89654036051 2.65546596893 147% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633507853403 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.624460129 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212398090948 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741796060493 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563031999857 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122490798177 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473074241993 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.