Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness.
However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money.
Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples.
In modern society we are all surrounded by many things and live in under the assumption that money can buy anything to lead happy and peaceful life. While others opine that funds have no relation to deal with cheeriness. In my opinion, I strongly believe that money has important role in our life to bring happiness. In the following eassy I will discuss my point of view in details.
To embark on, people commit thier entire lives by working hard and earning wages because to buy the needs which gives joy. Mostly some people get drepressed and lose there lives due to lack of currency, people who find delight in travelling diffrent countries and having a expensive things could'nt be savour without having bank balance as they can not survive without thier needs whre they is only one source for all this is income. For example people who are sick and need good medication or surgeries and requried capitol income for thier treatment thus it's closely related for thier happines.
However ,few people believe that money cannot remove thier sorrows and sufferings. family members who lost thier loved ones cannot bring them back with money as it is used for buying things and treatment. For example soldiers who lost there lives in war has nothing do with cash and has no value. Family members tears can't wipe thier tears with financial aid, they all need is sympathy and support.
To conclude, I personally believe that money gives lots of benefits to people like thier status and lifestyle. It is one of the most significant factors in todays world and every family depends up on thier economy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ything to lead happy and peaceful life. While others opine that funds have no relatio...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ravelling diffrent countries and having a expensive things couldnt be savour with...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...ffrent countries and having a expensive things couldnt be savour without having bank b...
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...countries and having a expensive things couldnt be savour without having bank balance a...
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...t survive without thier needs whre they is only one source for all this is income....
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey gives lots of benefits to people like thier status and lifestyle. It is one of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152173913 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26234100668 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2769741234 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267633121219 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943496990637 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627732208845 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15559956887 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354248416851 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.