Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Agree or disagree?
Nowadays there is an opinion that wealth can afford people to buy happiness. The question regarding linkage between money and mind's elation became high-debatable in social life today. I completely disagree with this statement and believe that material values can’t aid society to become happy and satisfied with their life.
Firstly, a lot of people believe that money can not provide us with such things as spiritual values like family, parents, friends, relationships. This is because every morally healthy person sees his bliss in a bona fide good relationship surrounded by family and welfare acquaintances.
For example, the survey conducted by the Ministry of Healthcare of the Russian Federation in 2019 showed that almost 80of Russian citizens believe that material wealth can not buy happiness because of spiritual values. In other words, people think that the values given to us from birth can not be the result of a purchase.
Secondly, a large part of the surveyed people said that another reason against “money and happiness” is that both spiritual and physical health can not be the consequence of buying something. Everyone has to appreciate the life given to us and not blame God for different faults. In other words, this means that the life we live is the most valuable thing for and you’re alive and healthy, you are already a happy person and no money is needed.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the statement that happiness is not a result of prosperity and believe that everyone should appreciate their life in spite of some tough situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69104490737 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7555191324 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.909090909 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305118840359 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104604745183 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679200297905 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164825477133 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036081330879 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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