The objective of running a business has been a debatable topic lately. While there are some fierce arguments for this, I completely agree that apart from making a profit, enterprises should make a contribution to society.
It is undeniable that money is one of the most tempting purposes in operating a business. Corporations and businesses have dozens of expenditures to be dealt with such as worker’s salary, taxes and so forth. Only if they earn enough money, they would be able to pay for all the fundamental costs. Furthermore, money also plays a vital part in investing purposes. To guarantee the future prosperity of the company, the management has to put in a lot of effort in the investing session which requires an enormous expense.
Making money, however, has to be cooperated with social aspects to fulfill the business’s thriving . A leading corporation is a company which is favoured by the community. If the company’s operator makes an effort to get support of the society, they would be successful greatly and accompanying it, the condition of the society would be improved as well. Additionally, a business which does not provide any social value could be eliminated from the business market. With an increasing number of existing businesses, the authorities would lay down some strict rules related to social responsibility for the businesses to stick to it.
To sum up, it seems to me that to be sustainably growing, businesses are supposed to rely on not only earning money but also stimulating the progression of the social community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pects to fulfill the business’s thriving . A leading corporation is a company whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, as to, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09338521401 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04394876124 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.209523803 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270775563509 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870296995618 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058509969933 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151683139261 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306063352909 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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