Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as govenrments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
there are some controversial opinions about the effect of covid 19. many people believe that coronavirus is becoming a massive problem for today's society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as governments losing a big part of their budget. others assume that covid 19 is treating the globe from pollution and other effects of humanity. In my opinion, I agree with the view that covid 19 is curing our environment.
On the one hand, coronavirus is posing many threats to our society. A large amount of money is spent for thousands of vaccine doses to reduce the death rate of covid19 patients. Furthermore, the trading economy is freezed due to the infection. Consequently, there is an increase in the number of the unemployed so that the governments are forced to grant them 1000$ per month to support them to live.
On the other hand, due to the freezing of industries, the number of greenhouse gasses such as CO2, Metan,... are reduced. As a result, the ozone layer,which has been depleted by human activities, is recovered. Moreover, the globe air quality is better than before the epidemic as a result from the quarantine period in many countries. Along with this, people from all over the world are witnessed the recovery of the ecosystem. some threatened animals such as wild tiger, penguins are showing a rise in the individuals in the species.
In conclusion, covid19 is treating pollution and other effects of human activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81296750075 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9250806013 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335696058631 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845412633704 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116381507328 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183583614952 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163746374231 0.056905535591 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.