Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views.
In recent decades, various nations have conducted global games events. Few assert that these are beneficial for a region while others think the opposite. This essay will scrutinize both the aspects in forthcoming paragraphs before venturing a logical conclusion followed by my opinion.
To commence with, there are numerous advantages of convening sports events. First and foremost, it is useful for development of a state as well as its citizens. In other words, the country hosting such affairs must develop its infrastructure, such as roads, stadiums, and transportation. Furthermore, a nation is representing itself on international level. In fact, it comes into recognition of many other countries which can be helpful for its relationships globally. To clarify, their trade links can be strengthened with the help of this limelight. For example, FIFA World Cup 2010 was conducted by South Africa for the first time in history. After the successful completion of the event, nation was praised by international bodies and provided opportunities to extend their business boundaries.
On the contrary, there are also some drawbacks of this. Primarily, such events are costly to be organized. To elaborate, the expenses of providing world class amenities to players and other guests as well as to preparing venues according to international sports standards are very high. In addition to this, there are huge possibilities of scams while preparing and spending budget on these occasions. To substantiate, concerned officials can easily manipulate funds allocation and fill their pockets with money rather than actually spending it on sports meet. For instance, during the Commonwealth Games 2010, which were conducted by India, there was a fraud amounting to rupees 70,000 crores becoming one of the biggest scams in history of sports events.
To encapsulate, it has both merits and demerits but, in my opinion, it is beneficial to organize such big events with proper due diligence for its fruitful results. Otherwise, these events can be affect economy of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40432098765 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00142697099 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608024691358 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3758297198 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1578947368 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0526315789 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174876084092 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480672434722 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322116134185 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975221012226 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108173311228 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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