Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
It is undeniable that building a good and strong relationship needs a lot of efforts from a person. It needs hard working, caring, and being faithfull and honest. I think that the most important consideration in any relation between people is telling the truth. I feel this way for two reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, telling the truth is an evidence or a proof of how strong the relation is or how
close those people are. If they always can tell the truth, it means that they trust each other. For instance, my friend Susan was married to a man whose she knew for at least ten years. They seemed very happy and in love. Last year, she surprised me that she was preparing the divorce paper. When I asked her about the reason, she said that she discovered that he had never trusted her, and their life was a lie. She told me that he always told her lies about his job, he said that he was an attorney, but he was a working in a market near a lawyer office. He said that his lies, which were not even close to the truth, was because he was afraid that she was going to left him, but Susan believes that it was out lack of trust. Therefor, she ended her relation with him.
Second, my grandmother used to say that lies do not stand for long time, and eventually they will be revealed, and their revealing will cause sever broken hurt, which is not a thing that could be done by a caring person. Back to my friend Susan, her life desroyed due to her ex-husband, and her heart too. She spent the whole last year recovering from her disappointment. This thing made her depressed, she cried every night for a year, and it also made her lose the trust in any relationship.
To sum up, I strongly believe that telling the truth is the most important consideration not only because it proofs the strength of the relation, but also it protects people from being heart broken for ever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: leave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, at least, for instance, i feel, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35933147632 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32835092347 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523676880223 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5648343133 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9444444444 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166022546163 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629543121965 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108315732116 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124809286027 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782243593062 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.