People should follow the local customs and traditions, when they come to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that immigrants ought to respect and keep up traditions and rituals of a host country. I completely agree with this idea because it helps newcomers to intergrade in a new community much faster and feel included in as well.
First, it is obvious that if a person wants to be accepted and found their place under the sun in a strange land, they should make an attempt in understanding and utilizing customs, laws and appropriate type of behaviour of the hosting land. It would be totally wrong trying to force their own traditions on local inhabitants. For instance, some foreigners arriving from Muslim society to western countries might fight against those women who wearing open-closes. It can be considered totally unacceptable as they have to respect local culture and vise versa those who immigrate to Arabic countries have to keep in mind cultural differences of their countries.
Second, taking part and accepting new ways of life such as celebration of residential festivals and holidays or taking part in various activities let newcomers to realize themselves as part of the society. In addition, it is a great way to communicate with others and make useful connections. To illustrate, one of my friends who immigrated to the USA used to attend Sunday meetings at the neighbourhood church at the beginning of his stay in the country. As a result, he found a large number of new acquaintances and even friends which he has been keeping in touch with since those days.
In conclusion, I totally agree that every single person settling down in foreign country should follow the local traditions and cultural habits due to the fact it will be significantly helpful for further integration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...y in the country. As a result, he found a large number of new acquaintances and even friends whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01742160279 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90054566368 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3107531462 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145090354524 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492596066163 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447510232309 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918368864148 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509608727126 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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