In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
It is said that in some nations, citizens are creating offspring late in their life. This essay will discuss the reasons for this tendency and decide whether the benefits of giving birth late outweigh its drawbacks.
To begin with, there are two main factors explaining why individuals are giving birth late when they are older. Firstly, creating children late can do wonders for people’s careers. It stands to the reason that citizens may not have to allocate their time and effort looking after their offspring. This can allow them to have more abilities to concentrate on their work and enhance their working skills, therefore moving up the career ladder. The second reason is that people who have late pregnancies may be more satisfied with their lives than those giving birth earlier. It is because they may not confront financial struggles due to the responsibilities towards their young. As a result, citizens giving birth late may not suffer from stressful child-caring periods, which can bring about superior mental well-being.
From my perspective, I believe that the advantages of having children late are surpassed by its disadvantages. The most notable upside of this trend is that individuals may have a superior child-raising experience when they are older. In reality, in some nations, people may be equipped with parenting skills during their working period in order to ensure that they can have enough child-rearing knowledge when they give birth. This can enable them to enhance their parenting skills thereby being more mature to take care of their offspring. However, one drawback of late pregnancy is that children may suffer from various disorders. According to numerous prestigious research, offspring whose mother is old may confront a serious disease called “Down”, which can lead to several issues in their future lives. Another disadvantage of this trend is that families which have old parents giving birth late may have more contradictions due to the large age gap. It stands to the reason that people living in different generations may have dissimilar opinions and thought. This can distance children from their parents and make the family’s atmosphere more strained.
In conclusion, there are various reasons for people giving birth late including more opportunities in their career and superior life satisfaction. From my perspective, I believe that the benefits of this tendency are overshadowed by its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e family’s atmosphere more strained. In conclusion, there are various reasons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34447300771 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76731845423 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493573264781 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6076003756 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.95 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257965465667 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954661445534 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698026189356 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207321484085 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696082884022 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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