Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Many people argued that turning convicts into law-abiding citizens via education is more effective than sending them to prison. While I accept that prison can deter crime from reoffend, I would argue that education plays an important role in reforming inmates.
On the other hand, I believe that sending law breakers to prison reduce the high incidence of crime. For instance, people who commit crime have an abhorrence with wealthy people and regarded as the fear of society so that are tough on crime. In addition, harsh punishment like putting on probation or captital punishment act as a deterrent to would-be offenders who deprive the live of innocent citizens. Furthermore, juvenile crime pose a threat to the society, most of them are likely to involve in unlawful actions like drug trafficking to satisfy their basis needs or manage tuition fee. In addition, some of them become addicted to drugs. Therefore, sending them to prison in order to resolve psychological problems like drug abuse is compulsory.
On the other hand, it is a good idea to offer vocational and academic courses for inmates. First, i believe this trend can be positive in several ways. To illustrate, education allows them to turn over a new leaf especially people with low literacy or socially disadvantaged backgrounds. some vocational courses offered can help them to secure a job like boot polisher or machanic or academic courses like computer programming as well as linguistics. Moreover, a close rapport accompanying genuine sympathy can be built among people. Second, dealth penalty and corporal punishment are considered as imhumanne and the convicts don’t have a chance to reintegrate back into society or receive rehabilitation programs especially homicide, murder, sexual assault. Additionally, a crime record made it difficult to land a stable job and gain job prospect for minor crime like shop lifting or theft.
To sum up, I believe that reforming offenders via education is much more effective than another counterpart and should be adopted to make the society better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25903614458 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84091557027 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5068463834 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176169933668 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586340398801 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567459711746 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115325520506 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496713716723 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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