Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that advertisements have become a prevalent tool for people on a daily basis. While I agree that advertising has brought many advantages in our lives, I believe that this also has some negative impacts.
There are many reasons why it can be argued that advertisements have a number of positive impacts on not only consumers but also businesses . To commence with, advertising provides details about newly launched products through media and online sources. It is essential for people to be aware of product information, which stimulates them to purchase goods that are being advertised. Moreover, it also would dispense thousands of employment opportunities for students who have graduated or those who are unemployed, for example creativity, manager, and sales. In addition, the wide popularity of TV commercials helps many businesses to approach prospective customers easily; thus, it facilitates increased sales and enhances those companies’ competitiveness in the market .
However, I am of the opinion that advertisements would have several adverse impacts on individuals and society as a whole. Firstly, it can be a harmful influence to the development of children, for instance fast food advertisements can influence the eating habits of the child and promote an unhealthy lifestyle, which results in being overweight . Secondly, advertising increases the cost of goods and services. Because it includes the money which brands have to spend on publicity materials. Furthermore, advertising encourages people to purchase what they do not really need, so most of those products are little used.
To sum up, advertisement plays an important role in modern society; and this has, in my view, benefits and drawbacks as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my view, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45185185185 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16985509491 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0727492652 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2307692308 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192458679759 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716733806701 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559588810641 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122892799966 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644390145796 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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