Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is argued that alternative forms of medicine are likely to be useless, or worse, harmful to the health of consumers. I somewhat agree with this viewpoint as there have been cases of patients jeopardised because of the afforementioned forms, but it should be acknowledged that some medical innovations are still well-done.
On the one hand, people should be wary of relying on new medical replacements for a combination of reasons. First and foremost, a number of medical forms apply new substances and components but fail to ensure effectiveness and safety. Not only is it a waste of money to buy them, but it also encourages the creation of those useless medical products. Another compelling reason is that new types of medicine can put an end to early medical scenes. For instance, the long-time herbial treatments that were known for their spectacular effects have been forgotten and disappeared in recent years. It is a loss for both the medical industry and humanity.
On the other hand, I believe there are some breakthroughs in the medical industry thanks to alternative forms of medicine. The primary reason is that research and equipment for medical alternatives have considerably evolved and given impressive results. Therefore, diseases can be cured and more people saved. Furthermore, the success of alternative medical forms is a substantial motivation for the industry. Hence, it will be pushed to develop and grow further to establish better products for humanity.
In conclusion, I believe that although some alternative forms of medicine are not reliable, there are still other medical replacements that should be appreciated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27376425856 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04555854534 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543726235741 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.429389304 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112218731818 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444633612751 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391313521987 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910064784097 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04321371584 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.