Many people are travelling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, travelling overseas has gained a massive popularity among individuals. There are a number of reasons behind this tendency, which is having corrosive impacts on the environment and the local culture.
On the one hand, the rising prevalence of international traveling can be attributable to two principal factors. The initial cause is that trips or vacations to overseas nations are beneficial for foreign holidaymakers in terms of widening their horizons. This is because when coming to another country, international tourists are able to experience different culinary art native customs and centuries-old traditions, therefore, open their minds and outlooks their horizon with a wealth of knowledge regarding cultures and customs. Another factor is that more and more people are likely to travel abroad in order to visit their relatives or family members living overseas. For example, an increasing number of Vietnamese tourists coming to Japan to visit their offsprings who opt for living and studying in this country to access more advanced education,
On the other hand, I believe that this tendency could exert myriad detrimental effects on the environment and the local residents. The first undesirable impact is that more tourists coming to this area could exert dire consequences on pristine beauty of nature. This is because in order to attract more foreign sightseers, areas once were pristine are now filled with excessive building of tourism-based facilities and infrastructure from tourist-oriented activities.Another malign influence worth mentioning is that the arrival of many travelers from different cultures could take its toll on the locals traditions and customs. In some cases, indigenous residents may copy the lifestyle brought by globetrotters, which results in the loss of native culture.
In conclusion, the increasing prevalence of travelling overseas is caused by several factors and this problem might exert adverse impacts on the environment and the domestic culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62540716612 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09427395277 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1190967192 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855105805536 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317016804135 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306485579674 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484694578645 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100458410107 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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