Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Why are experiments done on animals before humans? It is a good idea to do laboratory experiments on animals because it is effective and helpful. This essay will discuss replacing animal with humans as a tools in chemical tests and dangerous experiments. And how it useful for humans.
These experiments are conducted on diseases, whether they affect humans or animals.to clarify, It give information can be obtained that can only be known through this method. If this experiment is used on humans, there is a harm 1% on humans.in addition, animals are used to ensure its effectiveness and that it is safe to use without causing any harm. For example ,using part of pancreas of dog to produce insulin.
Doing an experiment on animals is effective and cannot cause any problems to humans. To clarify, some animals have the same biological similarities which make them positive model for diagnosing certain diseases. For example, rabbits were diagnose treatment of atherosclerosis through them ,moreover monkeys help to develop polio treatment and other animals help people in medical field by treating many drugs.
Animals are a gift from god to help people in their life especially medical side. I cannot agree more with using animals in labs and doing an experiments on them and provide them with protection during tests any product.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36529680365 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78328388216 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3248775503 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206260123278 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822069645852 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027183837581 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129384016873 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289570337001 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.