Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. other believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Culture is a neccessary part of every region and it is a duty of individuals to defend their traditions. Howerver, most argued that masses have no interest in conserve the customs of their region, while others think it is crucial to preserve the moral values. I am in favour of latter notion and this essay will articulate both views in the upcoming paragraphs.
Nowadyas, most people want to change their living standards and they also follow the western styles. To illustrate it, the advent of technolgy assist to civilians to acquire knowlegde about other cultures, traditions, rituals as well as lifestyles, so sometimes they changed their way of life by adapting the other regions traditions and it may cause to taking away people from their culture. Hence, that is why, maral values are not saved by individuals.
On the filp side, it is undeniable that culture is play essential role in the life of every person. So, it must be protect by residents. In other words, culture gives knowledge to people about their ancestors, traditonal habitants and ritulas. If masses would preseve their traditions, then they can pass knowlegde about their civilizations to the upcoming genrations. Not only civilians, but regime also take initiaves to maintain their moral values, government can encourage their residents and also can organise campus in the schools or universities to give knowlegde about traditions to the children. Therefore, that is why, it is important to save cultural values.
To conclude, although, it is not bad thing to acquire knowlegde about other cultures or moral values, but it is also essential for people to conserve their cultural values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15073529412 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74793243682 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4758844088 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.769230769 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260062625082 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857752075345 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566211786852 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159118161191 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236615371374 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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