Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent time, it has been noticed that there is a resemblance in the availability of goods and services from one country to another. I believe this is a good occurrence and the reasons why it is so will be explained in the following paragraphs.
To start with, there is a great deal of benefits when products can be bought in all part of the world. Firstly, it reduces any form of inconvenience on the consumers. To illustrate, when an individual needs to multitask and some foreign produce needs to be bought, such a person will find it more easier to get it in her residing country instead of ordering it from overseas. Moreover, cost of purchase may be reduced to an affordable price. This is due to the fact that an individual purchase in a foreign currency will be expensive compared to a bulk purchase already available in a store. Hence, enormous activities and money are saved.
Furthermore, time wastage is prevented. This means that the person meant to buy the goods do not have to go through rigorous stages like asking different people or surfing the internet which may take a longer duration before getting the exact location to buy it. In essence time is used effectively and other task can be attended to.
In conclusion, when varied products are available in every nation, it ease the burden and expenses on every persons as well as give room for effective time management which are of great advantages to the populace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...o be bought, such a person will find it more easier to get it in her residing country inste...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eases'?
Suggestion: eases
...ducts are available in every nation, it ease the burden and expenses on every person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74206349206 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.733879317 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8219637394 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104493743173 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291182010821 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330108024258 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549084099275 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240203957273 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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