More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?
It is widely acknowledge that the significant amount of individuals make a decision on follow healthy lifestyle and do work out frequently.There are a number of reason behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted by government and individuals to improve the situation.
There are two primary reasons why people determine have a healthy eating habit. One reason is that there are majority amount of citizens aware abount adverse impacts of unhealthy foods to their health.For examlpe, a person who consuming to much fast foods,soft drinhks and products contain sugar will be obese,moreover the obesity disease may lead to heart disease, respiratory and high cholesterol. Furthermore, a person who want to keep fit will consider the nutrition diet is of great importance with them,it attribute to their process to building muscle.
Fortunately, several measures clould be take to prevent this problem. The first solution would be advertisement of beverage and junk food should be banned by the government so that will deter the harmful products from consumers in large.The second measure would be the authorities should utilize policies to incentivise the residents follow the healthy diet is relevant.For example, if the government courage people follow the healthier eating habit by reward or discount healthy products,they will take it into consideration and utilize these items.Although some person will not conscious about this problem, the policy will become more prevalent and attract individuals who are pursuing a nutrition lifestyle.
To sum up,it is clear that there are various causes for the pursuit of keeping fit by eating habits,and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'acknowledged'.
Suggestion: acknowledged
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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... pursuit of keeping fit by eating habits,and steps need to be taken to tackle this p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48496240602 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99184118671 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.806793762 49.4020404114 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.428571429 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199313978345 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891436254621 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600511868051 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108306523214 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036413148423 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'acknowledged'.
Suggestion: acknowledged
It is widely acknowledge that the significant amount of individu...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...hy lifestyle and do work out frequently.There are a number of reason behind this phen...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
.... One reason is that there are majority amount of citizens aware abount adverse impact...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...acts of unhealthy foods to their health.For examlpe, a person who consuming to much...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...lth.For examlpe, a person who consuming to much fast foods,soft drinhks and produc...
^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , soft
... person who consuming to much fast foods,soft drinhks and products contain sugar will...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , moreover
...and products contain sugar will be obese,moreover the obesity disease may lead to heart d...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...on diet is of great importance with them,it attribute to their process to building ...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attributes'?
Suggestion: attributes
...iet is of great importance with them,it attribute to their process to building muscle. ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...armful products from consumers in large.The second measure would be the authorities...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...nts follow the healthy diet is relevant.For example, if the government courage peop...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...t by reward or discount healthy products,they will take it into consideration and uti...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...o consideration and utilize these items.Although some person will not conscious about th...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...uing a nutrition lifestyle. To sum up,it is clear that there are various causes ...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... pursuit of keeping fit by eating habits,and steps need to be taken to tackle this p...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48496240602 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99184118671 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.806793762 49.4020404114 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.428571429 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199313978345 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891436254621 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600511868051 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108306523214 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036413148423 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.