“More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?”
An increase number of people have the tendency to move to a large metropolis in the hope of better future. This essay will discuss several problems that have resulted from this trend and measure solutions to improve the lives of all city residents.
One of the major issues associated with this is that traffic congestion. The more people relocate to the city, the more enormous toxic emission will be released into the air and this will have resulted in serious air pollution and this lead to running a higher risk of various health problems such as asthma, lung cancer or respiratory diseases. For instance, a recent study declared that the number of people who live in metropolitan areas suffering from respiratory disease accounted for 70% so it is obvious that air pollution has adverse impacts on health’s society. Another alarming problem is that the rate of unemployment should be increased. The reason is that the infrastructure, as well as housing areas, have not caught up with the invasion of people moving to the city from urban areas while the cost of living has gradually rose so high crime and poverty rates will escalate, as well as lower life quality.
Since such problems are serious, the government should take steps immediately to address these issues. First, the government should encourage city dwellers to use public transport instead of private vehicles on account that reducing the number of vehicles will decrease, leading to the amount of hazardous gas emissions decline. In addition, the government should have some policies which could improve the infrastructure as well as employment opportunities because the primary reason of this migration is attributable to conditions in rural areas did not meet the demand for inhabitants so if they tackle this issue, the number of individuals moves to the city will decrease.
From what has been discussed, it is obvious that several problems from the invasion of people into megacities have a negative effect on urban dwellers, but I believe that the government should tackle these issues with effective approaches to ensure a better life for inhabitants.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...improve the lives of all city residents. One of the major issues associated with ...
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Line 6, column 838, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
... while the cost of living has gradually rose so high crime and poverty rates will es...
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Line 6, column 920, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...escalate, as well as lower life quality. Since such problems are serious, the gov...
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Line 11, column 677, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...viduals moves to the city will decrease. From what has been discussed, it is obvi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22413793103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77994630641 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.6109428 49.4020404114 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.25 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.5 20.7667163134 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197606131376 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804670960563 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408837329682 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119828470174 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192410516001 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...improve the lives of all city residents. One of the major issues associated with ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 838, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
... while the cost of living has gradually rose so high crime and poverty rates will es...
^^^^
Line 6, column 920, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...escalate, as well as lower life quality. Since such problems are serious, the gov...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 677, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...viduals moves to the city will decrease. From what has been discussed, it is obvi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22413793103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77994630641 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.6109428 49.4020404114 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.25 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.5 20.7667163134 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197606131376 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804670960563 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408837329682 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119828470174 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192410516001 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.