In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?
In modern society, an increasing number of school-leavers have difficulty getting a job. It is undeniable that several issues have resulted from this tendency and some solutions should be implemented to mitigate the rate of unemployed young people.
To begin with, there are several drawbacks of youth unemployment influencing both themselves and society. According to an individual’s perspective, it is detrimental to the mental health of university graduates. That’s because these students are under a lot of stress stemming from their family and peers, resulting in depression, suicidal thoughts, and even self-harm. For instance, family conflict is the leading cause of youth suicide on a yearly basis. On top of the negative effect on themselves, it also affects the quality of life in the community. This may be explained by the fact that high youth joblessness contributes to the proliferation of crime. In other words, if their standard of living does not allow them to meet their basic needs, they will have to turn to illegal acts to generate income, such as robbery, shoplifting, pickpocketing, or burglary.
Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should take steps immediately to address them. One solution to this problem is for the authorities to encourage the cooperative education program. It means that we provide students with the opportunity to gain practical work experience prior to graduation. Take FPT Software as an example; they ran a recruiting program for those who studied at its university. The main purpose of this scheme is to create favorable conditions for nurturing talented students. Furthermore, school-leavers should have a defined career path early on to have enough time to be well prepared. This is because those who acquire essential knowledge and skills have a good competitive edge over their counterparts. For example, it is clear that students who possess award certificates for excellent student contests are directly offered
To sum up, there are various negative consequences of high youth joblessness, and appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems, not only by the government but also by individuals.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39534883721 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11148103383 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1452638914 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.176470588 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137359836206 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041160214801 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033976022939 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827285456314 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206395601148 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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