Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that supporting developing nations brings more drawbacks than benefits. While I find this pointview appropriate to some extent, I also argue that aids can be beneficial for both poor and developed worlds.
One the one hand, I can understand why there are adverse effects when it comes to help coming from wealthy countries. It is no denying that nations receiving those aids will have a depent tendency on their own socio-economy. People will tend to wait for support from outside instead of managing to address their problems. For example, African nations’ economy is boosted by those foreign supplies of finance rather than by their own progress. The inhabitants and governments cannot enhance their local products or traditional crafts because of reliance on significant funds from other nations.
On the other hand, I am convinced that it is worth giving help from developed worlds to developing ones. Firstly, those support can be considered an incentive for poor nations to allocate it in order to improve road and medical facilities and their citizens’ life conditions, which is able to create some opportunities to attract foreign investors’ attention. Furthermore, helping other nations will likely be a helpful action for global development. There was no way to prevent the Covid-19 pandemic spreading around the world resulting in serious outcomes, if the wealthy countries did not support finance, medicine and food for the rest of the world.
In conclusion, giving help to poor nations causes negative impacts such as dependence on those support. However, I believe that it can bring some general growth for not only developing but also developed countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to come' or 'come'.
Suggestion: to come; come
...e adverse effects when it comes to help coming from wealthy countries. It is no denyin...
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Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rogress. The inhabitants and governments cannot enhance their local products or t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81380098701 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1487636864 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10794951344 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390430913719 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261425676229 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745484667962 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301144240973 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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