Some people say advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some argue that use of adverts would benefit economy, while other believe that it would cause dissatisfaction among people.
On the one hand, advertisement offers a wide range of merits to economy. First, It facilitates trades and stimulates consumption economy. This is because consumers have a tendency to buy products and services which are familiar to them. As advertisement is a useful instrument to promote brand images, it is therefore often utilized to bridge the buyers to manufacturers. More importantly, given advertisement sector is integral part of an economy, it creates jobs opportunities, ecourages development of other relevant domains of businesses including media, manufacture, marketing and so forth.
Apart from benefits, the use of ads also causes drawbacks upon its targeted customers. The first problem is that people would feel negatively about their appearance. This stems from the facts that celebrities who are hired to act in advertised videos or pictures are often good-looking and beautiful which may make watchers feel shame on themselves. Furthermore, advertisements often motivate luxurious lifestyle to promote their products, which may have a negative impacts of the less well-off. Thus, Impoverished individuals who may not be advantageous enough to mantain such high living standards would feel shy and inconfident when it comes to establising new social relationships.
In sum, even though the values of advertisement are undeniable, it would have negative impacts on people, especially the less well-off. I believe law markers should impose certain restrictions on promotion that support an extravagant living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67741935484 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2346250428 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66935483871 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2556937492 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120057502254 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392829698874 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276979840927 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639790552849 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212094935513 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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