The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts illustrate the results of researchs in one Africa country asking teenagers the key causes for using their phones from 2016 to 2019.
It is clear that the percentage of social networks was top the list between 2016 and 2019 . Additionally , the bottom position belongs to phone calls.
The percentages of social networks was highest in 2016 , at 50% , compare to phone calls , at only 10 % . At the same time , the proportions of Email and Digital camera were 25 % and 15 % respectively . The percentages of social networks was highest in 2017 , at 48% , compare to phone calls , at only 13 % . At the same time , the proportions of Email and Digital camera were 24 % and 15 % respectively.
The percentages of social networks was highest in 2018 , at 51% , compare to phone calls , at only 11 % . At the same time , the proportions of Email and Digital camera were 20 % and 18 % respectively . The percentages of social networks was highest in 2019 , at 56% , compare to phone calls , at only 5 % . At the same time , the proportions of Email and Digital camera were 19 % and 20 % respectively.
- Write about the following topic Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge 56
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 67
- The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024 67
- The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary Yen from 1953 to 1983 and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period 79
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81182795699 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80520707869 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408602150538 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3826198026 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988340542801 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548126062855 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910337895897 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119863430266 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124354753233 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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