Some people believe that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the main aim of advertisement is to target the youngsters. So, few masses assumed that it must be restrict. On my perceoption, I am completely agree with the said notion and this essay will articulate my views in the sbsequant paragraphs.
Children can face innumerable health issues by influnce from advertising. To explicate, the various fast food outlets use the advertisement method to introduce about themselves in front of teenagers. They not only present themselves, but also acquire attention from children towards junk food. To exemplify, who children are eating junk food, they can easily become prey of health diseases rather than who are eating traditional food. Thus, by eating fast food they can face a lot of health diseases such as obesity and bulk fat.
Moreover, sometimes youngsters are buying invaluable gadgets. To elaborate, advertisements always advertise the new market products such as mobile phones, luxurious cars, cosmetics and so on. So, these overpriced things can be purchased by children due to influence of advertisements. To epitome, the company named as Apple produced mobile phones namely as iPhone. This smartphone is a very expensive. Children can purchase this due to advertising, although it is a overpriced gadget.
To conclusion, I believe that ban should be imposed on advertising which are targeting teenagers because innumerable issues can be faced by children due to its influence on them.
- Some people argue that technological innovations such as mobile phone are making people socially less interactive Do you agree or disagree 67
- Nowadays many people have easy access to computers and a large number of children play computer games What are the negative impacts of playing computer games What can be done to minimize the bad effects 67
- Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves Some people think that it is good thing while others think that it has disadvantages Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference Discuss both 73
- Should smoking be banned completely 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38157894737 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05815629826 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1415311119 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163946485404 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508651351542 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570058048193 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113693022345 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685980884103 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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