Some people say that employees should be a part of decision making in their own respective organisations while others say that the top should take the decisions. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Being at the modern and developing era, the majority of people tend to live independently and take control of their lives as well as contribute their ideas and energies to a job. However, in fact, anyone cannot have the ability to master that decision, but it is necessary to have enough capacity and authority, under the division according to social status. Some people argue that decisions should only be taken by the management, while others feel that employees should be a part of the decision making process. Both views will be discussed in this essay before a conclusion is made. This essay shall intend to delve into my perspectives in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, there are many reasons for employees to participate in the decision making process. Personally, I partly support this point. Sometimes, managers and employees have got same wide experience and vast knowledge. It can never be denied that the employees are part of a company. It is their privilege to contribute to the success of a company due to the fact that they will benefit from its monetary gain. However, employees should only comment with the boss when making a decision, not the person who does it directly. For instance, if the employees have economic value, they will accept to increase in their salary, because they made the greatest contribution to the improvement of business. Hence, their collaboration will bring favourable benefits to them, which may strengthen the teamwork and collaboration.
Secondly, it is often said that the authority of the company is the one who invested most of the wisdom in the company. And, I completely agree with this point because managers have a lot of experience and knowledge out of the familiarities with the way the business operates. They are also aware of the strengths and weaknesses of their employees. This knowledge and experience allows them to make decisions that are beneficial to the company, its stakeholders and employees. However, if the management involves them in the decision making process, they will feel more confident in their roles with the reason for the fact that employees have a good aide.
In conclusion, I personally believe that employees must partake to the plans of a company as the authority might sometimes create exciting actions. While the organization does not have to discuss all the confidential information with them, they should at least be allowed to make decisions that have an impact on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0782396088 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81761053152 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515892420538 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5712344195 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.85 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237025310594 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733228610004 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834235724258 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154186400736 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581020497488 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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