University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an education degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
In today’s rapidly changing job market, having a good degree combined with soft skills has become a necessity, thus the way employers assess the academic qualifications of candidates has changed drastically. Despite the widespread opinion that a degree is the foundation of a career, many people believe that active student life is more fruitful for future work. This essay will prove that success in competitive employment sector is determined mainly by university experience.
First and foremost, education system frequently cannot keep up with the constant dramatic progress in technology. Generally, students can spend years studying already outdating information. For example, the constantly evolving artificial intelligence and big data analytics make the material you learn for 5 years almost irrelevant in 2-3 years. Whereas university life can teach students necessary flexibility and adaptability to any change. Consequently, it does not matter how good your degree is if you could not utilize the knowledge you have.
Moreover, student life plays an important role in shaping their system of competencies. The skills acquired at the university, such as communication, planning, critical thinking and problem solving never go out of date and people who have them are always in demand. For instance, about 95 percent of Australian employers are constantly looking for candidates that have the talents that can translate into innovation and out of the box thinking.
In conclusion, the education degree might give you a better understanding of a job subject, but in contemporary labour market you should bring more to the table. That is why I firmly believe that acquiring relevant university experience is actually more important than a degree.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53903345725 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0321540316 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672862453532 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3404199146 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278672972277 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868618943773 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825504131972 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17223195442 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119292633799 0.0609392437508 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53903345725 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0321540316 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672862453532 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3404199146 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278672972277 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868618943773 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825504131972 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17223195442 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119292633799 0.0609392437508 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.