Art classes such as painting or drawing are important for children's development, so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?
I agree that art-related subjects are of great importance to the development of children. However, this does not mean that these courses should be supplemented into the formal curriculum of high schools due to certain reasons which will be discussed below.
It is clear that art subjects make an equal contribution to the growth of a child compared to other subjects. By studying art courses, children may enrich their souls and strengthen their spiritual life. To take my younger sister who has been studying art classes for two years as an example, she shared that her drawing class has not only enhanced her artistic skills and creativity but it has also helped her in perceiving life from different angles, facilitating her ambition to be an artist in the future. In contrast, other subjects such as computer science and business may engender more job opportunities to leaners after they graduate from schools, but life would be meaningless if people spent all their time working and neglected recreational activities like painting or drawing.
Despite the foregoing arguments, I firmly believe that art subjects should be made optional rather than mandatory because of potential detrimental impact on students. Firstly, students who neither have a flair for nor interests in drawing often find this subject struggling; therefore, if they were obligated to engage in this subject, they would feel more pressure which can deteriorate their psychological health. Secondly, the price of most art courses seem to be prohibitively expensive which would engender a financial burden to students’ families.
In conclusion, although art classes can benefit students in certain aspects, high school students should not be required to attend these classes. Alternatively, high schools should make these subjects optionally available to their students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...optionally available to their students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43055555556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86821529014 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6518502233 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.181818182 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269037894391 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104949788708 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657705459031 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172733728299 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631846189604 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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