Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Lifestyle has a undergone many changes in a recent century. There is controversial view about weight of advantages and disadvantages of these changes. Some people believe that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children, whereas others hold the opposite perspective. My grandparent childhood refers to 70-80 years ago, and I agree to first group and the following paragraphs will elaborate reasons and details of my point of view.
Improving health care and sanitation saved many lives in past several decades. Today’s by progress medical science, the rate of children death sharply dropped and contagious diseases approximately eradicated. According to the research that recently conducted by the Harvard University, the rate of child death from four per ten children in 1940 had decreed to one per twenty. Besides, nowadays each family access to medical center in their neighborhood, contrary to the past that hospital and medical center not available to all families.
In addition, technology has had many growths, compared to the past. Technology has many different fields, such as: computer, internet, cell phone, smart watch etc. Each of these, has a great influence in a human life. Nowadays, people can communicate each other throughout the world in a moment. They can online do a lot of work by computer or smart phone in their home while sitting on a sofa and talking with their family. In contrast, in the past a person must waiting a month for receive a mail from neighbor country or spend several hours in line for paying a bill that now we cannot even imagine that.
In contemporary people’s lives convenient transportation become inseparable part of life. Having a car has affordable to families and also, people have many options for traveling. For instance, a person can eat a breakfast in London, travel by airplane to New York and attend to a business meeting at noon, return to London for sleep. Compare to the past that the car was luxuries tools and traveling between London and New York was about a month.
Taking into account of all factors as mentioned above, we can conclude that life today is more convenience and comfortable until it was when our grandparents were children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Lifestyle has a undergone many changes in a recent cent...
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Line 2, column 544, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l center not available to all families. In addition, technology has had many gro...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...s, compared to the past. Technology has many different fields, such as: computer, internet, ce...
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Line 4, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... London and New York was about a month. Taking into account of all factors as me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08870967742 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83866258311 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7575113087 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6315789474 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175259204277 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045439053989 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080728479026 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110189596657 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954971480192 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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