These days, more and more young people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country and give your opinion
With the rapid proliferation of international integration, relocation either for work or study appears to enjoy widespread popularity among the young. While this trend may indeed have some potential drawbacks, I believe they are eclipsed by the substantial benefits offered to young people.
On the one hand, there have been several disadvantages to living and studying in another country for a significant time period. To begin with, people who move away from their homeland are more at the risk of enduring mental health problems, which stems from racism and discrimination. It can be seen that a great deal of students and workers seem to be treated unfairly in some circumstances, by taking anti-Asian trend or anti-black as an example. Along with physical distance that discourages them from confiding their troubles to their beloved ones,consequently, many expatriates currently suffering from inequality are more vulnerable to mental health issues, such as depression. In addition, prohibitive living costs in foreign countries could probably put workers or students in trouble. Young people coming from third-world countries often live on a strict budget. Therefore, when living in a developed country, they have to deal with numerous issues, namely high tuition fees, travel expenses, utilities, among others. These necessary expenditures should be taken into consideration before an individual makes a decision whether either to live or study abroad or not.
On the other hand, regardless of all aforementioned drawbacks, the impacts of immigrating overseas have not always been negative. It is apparent that overseas students and workers seem to reap tremendous benefits of employability. Studying or Working in a developed country offers young people a great deal of opportunities to come into contact with by far the most state-of-the-art technology and technique, which helps them broaden their horizons and sharpen their social skills. Associated with the value of Bachelor’s degrees obtained in an international university, they are often more appreciated than those working or studying in the motherland. Not to mention, being trained in a multicultural environment from an early age might help people reach maturity including emotional and intellectual sites. Living in a completely strange country means that they have to face many problems such as loneliness and homesickness on their own. Once overseas people can tackle these, they become increasingly intensive to solve any other issues in their lives.
In conclusion, although living and studying abroad have both negative and positive impacts on each individual, I believe that the disadvantages tend to outweigh the advantages. Therefore, in order to be on the right track, young people should take into account all of factors when they choose to relocate to a foreign countries
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , consequently
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'country'?
Suggestion: country
...en they choose to relocate to a foreign countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, therefore, third, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54794520548 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10743258627 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566210045662 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.158343103 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.894736842 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258260218846 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793211246282 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660890765444 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152225014347 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407011290569 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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