A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him ab

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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Thank him for the invitation
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit

Dear Jack,
I am writing to thank you for your warm invitation, and it gives me goosebumps when I dream of holidays with you at your place. But unfortunately, I can't come this time due to my hectic schedule.

Let me explain my situation in detail. I have recently started a new job in a company to accomplish a challenging project, and I am working round the clock. At the same time, I need to go to Dubai for its completion and will be there for a month. I hope you will understand my situation and forgive me this time.

However, there is no need to get disappointed as I can avail a month-long holiday after the project's completion. I hope we can plan for a trip in late September. Let me know if that is convenient for you. I am excited about the opportunity to relish the beauty of beaches in Australia with you. I have a lot of gossips to share with you.

Please let me know. Take care and keep in touch.

Your friend,
MA Rahman

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...you at your place. But unfortunately, I cant come this time due to my hectic schedul...
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Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'projects'' or 'project's'?
Suggestion: projects'; project's
...an avail a month-long holiday after the projects completion. I hope we can plan for a tr...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30726256983 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68677333903 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7087266497 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.0714285714 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7857142857 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213024291412 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697610905989 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759420683756 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112468082255 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986035404831 0.0580467560999 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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