Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which do you think is a better educational system?
Opinions are divided on whether many education systems allow students to approach theoretical knowledge of various subjects until they leave school, other students at the age of 15 should be mandatory to learn key subjects. While I understand the logic behind the former view, I am still in favour of the latter.
Those who believe that holistic learning education with a variety of subjects will take advantage of students may have several arguments. They may well argue that there should be a requirement for childrens to study this method is dramatically useful in the future, because it allows students to approach numerous fields and increasingly their theoretical capital. Students who want to pursue engineering; for instance, having a chance to be taught some natural subjects including chemistry, physics, biology will help them gain in-depth knowledge and familiarity with educational programs when they study in university.
Nevertheless, I still believe that education systems which only concentrate on their students study certain subjects for many reasons. Chief among these is that students do not spend their time too much doing homework;therefore, it helps them have more time with their family and friends to participate in extracurricular activities or play sports and make more friends. Such activities not solely enable them to improve soft skills consisting of teamwork, communication, and handling situation skills which can open the door to better job opportunities, but also expand social circles. On top of that they can use this time to find out clearly what they really like in their inner self or learn more subjects they chose. As a result, it brings career prospects for their later life.
In conclusion, although the knowledge learnt in various classes is potentially helpful, I believe that a study program with not so many classes is more beneficial to students who can have more time for deeper study or relaxation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to key'
Suggestion: to key
... age of 15 should be mandatory to learn key subjects. While I understand the logic ...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry, physics, biology will help them gain in-depth knowledge and familiarity with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32903225806 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90551164493 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9158796343 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.181818182 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310840252191 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115105955419 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107999684865 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184910763339 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937069714112 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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