Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted.
Give some reasons why this growth has occurred and suggest some practical solutions to this problem.
Urbanisation has become a global phenomenon. The influx of migrants, students and job hunters has caused the overcrowding and pollution of metropolises worldwide. This essay will outline the main causes of the congestion of cities and suggest ways in which it can be resolved.
The two main contributing factors to the congestion of cities are inadequate employment opportunities and poor infrastructures in rural areas. Firstly, large-scale mechanization of agriculture in small communities has possibly put many people out of work, while at the same time opportunities for other means of employment are increasingly limited. Therefore, the limited access to youth employment and low wages have likely encouraged a large number of young people to transfer to cities. Second, rural areas lack basic infrastructures such as public transportation systems, healthcare and educational facilities. For example, when residents of small towns want to seek medical treatment, they have to travel long distances to reach the nearest clinic or hospital. Also, students have limited or no access to basic learning tools or technologies, and thus they seek higher education in metropolises.
Regarding potential solutions, one effective method would be to reduce rural-urban migration by increasing investments in basic amenities such as healthcare clinics, high-quality schools, public libraries and self-employment facilities. This is likely to lessen the number of people migrating and promote job creation for inhabitants of the area. Another possible solution is for governments to invest more in the public transportation system and transport infrastructure. If the government worked on adding bus lanes, widening roads and building tunnels, then it can alleviate traffic congestion and improve commuters’ productivity.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the issue of city congestion and to reduce the influx of migrants into urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77586206897 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3335055445 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0560266231 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900663387607 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308890057844 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234727171293 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574482469756 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190172167164 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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