you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job you think he she should get a job

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you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job

Dear Sesa

How are you ? hopefully you and your family are in good condition, Iam writing this letter to inform about my advice about some question which you asked to me last week
Actually, Yesterday I read your letter which is you send to me about your plan after finish your senior high school and I understand about your condition now, but you should share to me about your problem which is make you don’t enjoy to going to the college because I think you have good potential to be a lecturer In the future because you have good knowledge and easier apply your skill when you was in the school, but if you want finish your study I think you should getting job directly because you can easy to apply for in big company because you have a lot of experience especially about leadership and . according to me you suitable to work as human resource because you have good knowledge about how to teach new empolyee and also you creative and open minded about every problem. If you interest I can find out company wich suitable for you.
Thank you for giving the matter yout attention and I hope to hear your reply soon

Your faithfully

Muhammad Abdurrohman

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sesa How are you ? hopefully you and your fam...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hopefully
Dear Sesa How are you ? hopefully you and your family are in good conditi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any because you have a lot of experience especially about leadership and . accord...
^^
Line 4, column 611, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...erience especially about leadership and . according to me you suitable to work as...
^^
Line 4, column 614, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...ence especially about leadership and . according to me you suitable to work as human res...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 614, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: in my opinion; I think
...ence especially about leadership and . according to me you suitable to work as human resource ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5980861244 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26073802375 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 16.3608247423 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 273.850616213 44.8134815571 611% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.2 76.5299724578 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8 16.8248392259 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323149769806 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160887751422 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845611065841 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154373903565 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118184805813 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 8.37731958763 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 7.45979381443 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 8.62886597938 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 8.54432989691 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sesa How are you ? hopefully you and your fam...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hopefully
Dear Sesa How are you ? hopefully you and your family are in good conditi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any because you have a lot of experience especially about leadership and . accord...
^^
Line 4, column 611, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...erience especially about leadership and . according to me you suitable to work as...
^^
Line 4, column 614, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...ence especially about leadership and . according to me you suitable to work as human res...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 614, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: in my opinion; I think
...ence especially about leadership and . according to me you suitable to work as human resource ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5980861244 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26073802375 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 16.3608247423 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 273.850616213 44.8134815571 611% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.2 76.5299724578 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8 16.8248392259 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323149769806 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160887751422 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845611065841 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154373903565 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118184805813 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 8.37731958763 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 7.45979381443 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 8.62886597938 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 8.54432989691 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.