the growth of online shooping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing
Nowadays it is believed that the growth of online shoping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing. In this essay. I completely agree with this statement because it has more merit rather online is not waste much time when
than merit for some reason
In the one hand, the main benefit of people prefer buying Buurchase stuff. It is because they are not necessary go to mall which is they just choose in phone.
For example in this era frequently application offer discount so that each person interested and
leave transaction offline. As result facilitate while paid order. It is important that many buyer more
enjoy and happy because this method easy to use
However, there are some drawback of this problem first of all. Firstly they can not try and look the goods directly. It is due to the application just display picture. Taken as example in shopee website.if the person want buy something they should make sure the size because they can't attempt. So that many user disappointed since the condition stuff not good. Secondly risk cheater from seller. It is became many fake shop in this application. For example my friend has been order and paid but until now the packet not come to home. neverthless some people worried purchase online. It is no dought that everyone must becarefull and aware about this matter
To sum up from where stand I believe that the society should be adaptation and have knowledge while buying online. Because many criminal use this method
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...r online is not waste much time when than merit for some reason In the one han...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Leave
...t so that each person interested and leave transaction offline. As result facilita...
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ested and leave transaction offline. As result facilitate while paid order. It ...
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Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...blem first of all. Firstly they can not try and look the goods directly. It is due to t...
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Line 13, column 281, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... should make sure the size because they cant attempt. So that many user disappointed...
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Line 13, column 403, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...econdly risk cheater from seller. It is became many fake shop in this application. For...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Neverthless
... until now the packet not come to home. neverthless some people worried purchase online. It...
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Message: Did you mean ''?
...nd I believe that the society should be adaptation and have knowledge while buying online....
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and have knowledge while buying online. Because many criminal use this method
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85658914729 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31997062181 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.4485864001 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7058823529 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140924240917 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04628395088 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148006720907 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577336862822 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129669641576 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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