You recently attended a meeting at a hotel when you returned home you found you had left some important papers at the hotel

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. when you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Dear Sir/Madam
My Name Muhammad Abdurrohman
I am Your Customer
I am Writing this letter to inform about my stuff which leaved in your hotel

Actually, Yesterday my company maked gathering and meeting in your ballroom until midnight and I back after finished my task with transportation which provided by my office. After I arrived in my home I find out my paper which important for my job losed. I remember last time I puted my project in the beside of mosque after I finished pray. that document extremly needed for incresed my career because I am as a head of this project and have responsibility to finished this work. Hopefully you can arranged your empoyee to searched my proposals and give me information as soon as possible when my document found because my colleague waited for this document for continued our project

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon

Your faithfully

Muhammad Abdurrohman

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...beside of mosque after I finished pray. that document extremly needed for incresed m...
^^^^
Line 6, column 500, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'arrange'
Suggestion: arrange
...o finished this work. Hopefully you can arranged your empoyee to searched my proposals a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hear your reply soon Your faithfully Muhammad Abdurrohman
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93865030675 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73682900056 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.731821788 44.8134815571 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.0 76.5299724578 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.6 16.8248392259 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833658526146 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404519440628 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419526141652 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438582810987 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398088086213 0.0580467560999 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 8.37731958763 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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