As countries become more industrialized, more people move from the countryside to urban areas. What are some problems caused by this and how can we solve them?
Nowadays, people worldwide from all age groups are concerned about the increasing issue of obesity resulting from the over-consumption of fast food and inactive lifestyles. Therefore, the government and everyone needs to take action by implementing possible solutions. This essay will discuss the reasons for overweighing and propose some measures to decline the high rates.
Firstly, the main reason for the rise in obesity is the high intake of fast food such as chips, hamburgers, and fried chicken. Apart from being tasty, this kind of food offers little or no nutritional value to the human body. The mass-produced food industry has ongoing development, and people tend to consume processed food due to their busy life. After a hectic time at work, they would buy packaged meals in the supermarket or get a takeaway than eat home-cooked meals. Moreover, preparing food in advance is time-consuming. To tackle this problem, the government should increase the tax on purchasing junk food, which would help reduce a large amount of consumption. Besides, local councils could launch campaigns and programs to raise residents’ awareness of the dangers of obesity caused by eating fast foods, for instance, heart disease and diabetes.
Secondly, another cause of being fat is an inactive lifestyle. A busy life leads people to come home and lie in bed instead of going to the gym. Employees are exhausted after a long day at work. Furthermore, more and more youngsters prefer sitting in front of the TV and computer to entertainment and refusing exercise. Couch potatoes and inactive people are easy to become overweight. Therefore, a solution that can address the problem is that companies should build in-house gym facilities and stimulate their employees to keep fit. Schools should encourage students to exercise, and adults can be a positive example for their children by playing sports with them.
To sum up, obesity is undoubtedly associated with the unhealthy lifestyles of humankind. This issue cannot be ignored but addressed by communities and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31610942249 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92056618789 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647416413374 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.186305213 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0526315789 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159193849038 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401350611993 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345497207926 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822918833093 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450021357476 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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