An increasing number of parents believe that computers and tablets will help their children learn technology skills. Despite some certain benefits, I am convinced the drawbacks of this tendency are greater, as we shall see.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that computers and tablets have significantly enhanced children’s technological abilities. Besides a tremendous source of knowledge, numerous apps from these devices with intuitive and intriguing teaching methods allow children to absorb the information quickly and effectively. Some kids can even know how to create codes to make simple software or games based on the instructions they find online. This will be concrete grounds for those youngsters to flourish their talents if adults pay proper attention to them.
Notwithstanding the advantages, there are two serious issues that parents should take into account of giving their children computers or similar devices. Firstly, not all children love technology, and computers or tablets do not merely offer technological lessons. Internet contents are various, distracting and time-consuming; hence, they might affect the kids’ studying results. Secondly, the prevalence of health problems in children due to sedentary lifestyles and excessive use of smart devices has increased at an alarming rate. Therefore, instead of encouraging, parents should reduce the time their kids spend on computers. For the majority of children, I think some technological skills brought by machines are by no means essential than their mental and physical health.
In conclusion, although computers or tablets are useful, parents should strictly monitor the time and the way their kids use them because some potential risks might outweigh the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64905660377 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94862621952 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683018867925 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3832603387 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35115759112 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114469097867 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767206244681 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198602514651 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554739627536 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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