The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
In this day and age, the phenomenon of animal’s disappearance which is caused by human destructive activities on both land and in the ocean has been transpiring. Deforestation and overfishing are two core grounds which can be radically tackled by enforcing stricter rules and organizing protecting animals events.
Admittedly, it is visible that there are a multitude of roots leading to the extinction of animals. To be more specific, regarding land, a handful of residents are inclined to deforest in order to make way for agriculture and farming. Evidently, a massive number of virgin forests no longer exist; it signifies that myriad species are gradually in a state of evaporation due to their habitat loss. Furthermore, in the sea, the act of overfishing is considered to result in this practice. It is undisputed that people currently catch fish as well as other sea creatures without any restriction. Thus, legion sorts of sea species no longer appear in the ocean compared to the past.
In the interim, there are a wide range of measures that people can apply to address the extinction of animals these days. First off, the authorities ought to enforce stricter rules to prevent this practice. If there are some people who have a tendency to cause animals’ loss, they have to be punished by going to prison rather than being fined by money. Second, it is imperative for local inhabitants to organize the events about preserving animals every month. Practically, this kind of event can raise other people’s awareness about the essence of animals and promote them to protect those who are endangered.
To sum up, the animal disappearance can be caused by deforestation and overfishing which can be sorted out by setting stricter rules and holding events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09278350515 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92386756659 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6567476116 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179687879029 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577566040342 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397164167981 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998218504156 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480869602616 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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