Nowadays, almost everyone knows about the benefits of doing sports for both mental and physical improvements. But some people are fans of team sports, while the others prefer to work out individually. In this essay, I discuss both sides of the argument and explain why I believe although any kind of physical practice is beneficial, team sports have more positive effects.
Firstly, anyone who takes exercise will learn determination and self-reliance while improving their overall health and fitness. Taking part regularly in gyms and clubs for doing sportive activities requires perseverance and commitment. This motivates sportspersons to adhere to their plans and keep working out although it requires hard work. Moreover, physical exertion is the key for having stronger muscles and it decreases the chance to get different diseases. For instance, it helps reduce the risk of chronic conditions like diabetes, heart disease, many types of cancer and depression.
Secondly, individuals who join groups to do sports, develop interpersonal skills, like teamwork and communication skills while taking advantage of doing physical activities. Social skills like cooperation and the ability to make strong and warm relationships with others are important factors for having a successful social life. Team sports also offer players the chance to develop a sense of unity, friendship, and sportsmanship between teammates. It is not deniable that humankind enjoys the feeling of being accepted among the others and belonging to communities.
As a conclusion, although anyone who takes part in any kind of sport activities, whether individual or collective privileges a fit and healthy body, group work out helps attendees to build their social skills as well.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57249070632 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92483562336 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0523439748 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221705340441 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702432126263 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046329864469 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130531767699 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383558250819 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57249070632 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92483562336 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0523439748 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221705340441 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702432126263 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046329864469 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130531767699 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383558250819 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.