it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Some people claim that it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. In my opioion, I think it is important to make new friends instead of just keeping friemdship with old friends for following three reasons.
First of all, meeting new people gives everyone a new esperience and an exposure. If one just keeps hanging out with old friends then they will never be able to come out their comfort zone. For example, I changed my school in 5th grade where I made many new friends and I got to know about them. It was a very new experience for me and learned a lot from them. New people can make you learn so much one may never know in their life.
Secondly, you may never know how close you can get to new person as they can relate to your things and similarly they can relate to yours. This will only be known once you meet and make new friends. For example, I met my a friend in a drawing class and one day we were sitting next to each other and we started talking. Then we realised that we had a lot in common like food habits, family background, hobbies, etc. Once you know someone then you realise how same or different is that person from you.
Lastly, it is not always true that you can feel comfortable with old friends but once you take a risk of meeting new people the dynamics can change for the better. People meet their soulmate randomly and it is said you meet right person at the right time. So you have to keep hustling for that and rsk is something you have to take without which one may never be able to meet anyone. For example, I intered at a company as software developer and I was very new to this professional field but I met a person who soon became my go to person in company. I wouldn't have found him if I didn't take the risk and gathered courage to make new friend.
In conclusion, I think it is very important to make new friends and not just hang out with old friends and give importance to them. Although old friends are of great impostance as they know us from very long time and they are our go to person and comfort people.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ryone a new esperience and an exposure. If one just keeps hanging out with old fri...
^^
Line 7, column 554, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...on became my go to person in company. I wouldnt have found him if I didnt take the risk...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 582, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... company. I wouldnt have found him if I didnt take the risk and gathered courage to m...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 22.412803532 281% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 402.0 270.72406181 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21641791045 5.08290768461 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18341794622 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457711442786 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4205062781 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2105263158 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388594861806 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146604711755 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176048547763 0.0662205650399 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298948141029 0.162205337803 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217654372852 0.0443174109184 491% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 53.8541721854 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 12.2367328918 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.42419426049 76% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ryone a new esperience and an exposure. If one just keeps hanging out with old fri...
^^
Line 7, column 554, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...on became my go to person in company. I wouldnt have found him if I didnt take the risk...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 582, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... company. I wouldnt have found him if I didnt take the risk and gathered courage to m...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 22.412803532 281% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 402.0 270.72406181 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21641791045 5.08290768461 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18341794622 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457711442786 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4205062781 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2105263158 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388594861806 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146604711755 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176048547763 0.0662205650399 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298948141029 0.162205337803 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217654372852 0.0443174109184 491% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 53.8541721854 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 12.2367328918 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.42419426049 76% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.