Write a paragraph of about 150-200 words about the benefits of volunteering.
There are indeed a lot of benefits coming from doing volunteer work. To begin with, by volunteering, one can help to improve the lives of disadvantaged people around them and help them to integrate into the community. For example, by donating books and clothes to children living in underpriviledged conditions in mountainous areas, a person can help such kids to be warmer during cold winters and have a better education. More importantly, volunteering can also be beneficial to volunteers themselves. By illustration, when joining in voluntary groups or charity organizations, a person may feel a stronger sense of purpose in life, make new friends of the same interests and gain invaluable skills such as interpersonal communication, leadership and problem-solving. In addition, volunteering can also enhance one's employability. This is chiefly because employers usually prefer employees who are energetic, confident, and willing to lend a hand to others. To conclude, it is highly advisable that every individual should take part in some volunteer work, to better not only their lives, but also those of the needy and the whole society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 813, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...addition, volunteering can also enhance ones employability. This is chiefly because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37430167598 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32413032077 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715083798883 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6663459557 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727382722607 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401755726098 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467695039332 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727382722607 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.