There holds a debate of a large number of Vietnamese that people should stop killing cats and dogs for food since these animals are very friendly and close to people. Others still remain this eating habit since these animals supply a huge amount of meat for people traditionally. Which idea are you in favor of?
Opinions are divided among Vietnamese people on whether the practice of killing cats and dogs should be done away with or continued. In my opinion, this eating habit should be stopped for several reasons.
Granted, one might argue that it is justfiable to kill dogs and cats for meat. This is predicated on the assumption that these animals’ meat can provide extra proten in addition to that of pigs and chicken, which is undoubtedly essential to a healthy diet. While this line of reason seems to be true in theory, this eating habit can actually bring a lot of associated health risks. In fact, research has shown that cats’ and dogs’ meat might contain parasites, which can later result in blindless, myocarditis and even respiratory failure. This clearly renders that it is not at all advisable to use dogs’ and cats’ meat as a source of food.
To add further credence to my assertion, I note that unlike pigs or chickens, cats and dogs have long been humans’ closest friends. This is because for ages, dogs have been reliable home guards, and cats have significantly aided people in chasing mice and rodents. In addition, it has been scientifically proven that these pets can be greatly beneficial to humans’ health as well. More specifically, cats and dogs can provide valuable companionship especially to older members, ease feelings of loniless and motivate us to exercise in a more frequent basis. Given their great advantages and close relationship with humans, it is therefore reasonable to say that they should never be killed and used as food.
To conclude, my view is that people should not kill cats and dogs for their meat, for the reasons stated above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94014084507 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64650801279 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8587860491 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292356951105 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107803124719 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546843498402 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193581956079 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346148631016 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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