You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and made comparisons with relevant.
The bar chart illustrated the number of visitors who visit a community website throughout the first and second year of operation.
Overall, two of years have same flow when the users of both years are fluctuated during the period. But the user in the second year higher than the first year.
This website has operated in September, and it increased steadily to 10000 users in November and December. Then this website has significant decreased to nearly 0 users in February. After that they has a rapidly growth and got peak at 16000 users in august and they end the first year.
The trend for the following year was pretty much the same, but it oscillated in greater amount. It started with approximately 3000 number of visits in September and doubled it in next month. After that, they have a steeply increased to 18000 number of visits in November. Although it dropped to 10000 in February and March, it then recovered and rose significantly to reach a top in July, with more than 20000 visitors. However, the last month data was sudden drop to around 13000 people.
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- A growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including uses for food and research Discus 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ly 0 users in February. After that they has a rapidly growth and got peak at 16000 ...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('rapidly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
... users in February. After that they has a rapidly growth and got peak at 16000 users in august a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7688172043 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48545892544 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7636764117 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6363636364 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204987939637 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810341393464 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770668801822 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145201049544 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851845172921 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.