The maps of Norbition Industrial Area now and future planning shows us that there will be a main funcional change in this place where the indtustrial area will be rebuilt and expanded as a civil community with convinient traffic and well-equiped living infrastrutures.
As we see the map of the place now, we can find that this industial area locates to the south of the river which the north bank is farmland.There are just two roads in this area with one circle traffic corner. There are several factory buildings to the banks of the two streets.
When we look at the planned future development map below the map of the place now, we will find there will be a total change in this palce where there is no factory buildings now, instead, the housing buildings will be built in this area. In details, we can see from the north bank of the river, ther will be a new building created and the affiliated road will be constructed. Moreover, a new bridge will be build on the river which connects the banks of river. Heading to south, the original circle ftrffice corner will be developed a new road to the northwest and there will be housing buildings to the end of the road. The factoy building near the corner will be changed as shops and a new medical center will be built to the south east of the corner. To the east, we can see there will be a new playground to the north bank of the street and at the end of the street , a new school will be created.
At last , we can see a new cirlce corner will be reconstructed in the south of the area which will make the traffc more covinient in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... river which the north bank is farmland.There are just two roads in this area with on...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the street and at the end of the street , a new school will be created. At las...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a new school will be created. At last , we can see a new cirlce corner will be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 1.00243902439 1995% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 298.0 196.424390244 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38926174497 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45172048434 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412751677852 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0902654346 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926632045083 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453798472532 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630211630228 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838045416118 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601179556179 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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