Nowadays, a growing number of people with heath problems are trying to alternative medicines and retreatment instead of visiting their usual doctor
These day, more and more people tend to use the tranditional or unthrodox methods to improve or retreat their health problems instead of going to heath care centres or hospitals. I strongly believe that this trend more harmful than benificial.
There only one reason why i think this is positive point is it saves money for people.This would be true if people are suffered from midly ill such as flue or weather allergy. You could buy some basic medicines at the stores to tackle the problem.
But it is noticiable that there are serveral disadvantages of this trend. The first drawback is that effecting on seriously people's health.They may suffer from various heath problems ranging from tired , anxiety to stroke or even cancer. Moreover, they might be bough unknow herb by crook and using it wihout guiding from Doctor which results in advere their health. Another drawback is that trying some medical unorthodox methods have severe impact on social awareness which means that it may create the wrong thinking in young generations. My cousin sister is a case in point, her rarely comes ro hospitals or health care centres when she get hurt instead of coming pagoga to pray or buying some antibiotics by someone advises in order to reduce her pain.Now, these idea passes on to her daugter which means that hospital is the place for serious illnesses and needn't coming these places to check up health.
In conclusion, in my oppinion, using medicines or any methods without guiding orthodox doctors have several detrimental effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48147155952 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66796875 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5062273127 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149323659062 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566626417528 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540152348378 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091378968636 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332512108074 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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