One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer, and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed that the life span of humans has increased because of advancements in medical management. Though many individuals opine that there is a burden in maintenance. I believe there are many merits of this situation. Besides getting benefits from the government, their family members also get assistance for living.
To begin with, Government provides a pension scheme for the Maintainance of the elderly along with special benefits in almost all parts of society. For Instance, IRCTC provides special reservations and discounts in traveling plans and all banks offer extra interest rates in Fixed deposits for those who crossed 65 years of age. In addition, Family bonding increases. In many cultures, it’s the norm for elderly parents to live at home with their children under the same roof. with loved ones around, our family structures and individual relationships could be transformed with a new degree of richness. Moreover, youngsters benefit from a mentorship relationship. With an aging population, younger people will have the chance to talk and raise their social awareness.
However, a few disadvantages are involved in living a long life. The Foremost is, Senior care comes at a higher cost. As we get older, the cost of our healthcare needs steadily rises. it isn’t always easy for seniors to have the quality of life they deserve today. Besides, the longer they live loneliness they get. Old people have to watch almost everyone they know die. That is very difficult and it can be very isolating to be the only one left from the world that you remember.
To conclude, In my view, life expectancy outweighs its drawbacks as this will not only benefits the senior citizens but also the family members
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of advancements in medical management. Though many individuals opine that there is a ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...ith their children under the same roof. with loved ones around, our family structure...
^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...of our healthcare needs steadily rises. it isn’t always easy for seniors to have t...
^^
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...ghs its drawbacks as this will not only benefits the senior citizens but also the famil...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...drawbacks as this will not only benefits the senior citizens but also the family ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09507042254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72167155119 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4377036738 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1578947368 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158028785134 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445083621667 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489734785444 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973146615965 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451483117865 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of advancements in medical management. Though many individuals opine that there is a ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...ith their children under the same roof. with loved ones around, our family structure...
^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...of our healthcare needs steadily rises. it isn’t always easy for seniors to have t...
^^
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...ghs its drawbacks as this will not only benefits the senior citizens but also the famil...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...drawbacks as this will not only benefits the senior citizens but also the family ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09507042254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72167155119 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4377036738 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1578947368 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158028785134 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445083621667 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489734785444 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973146615965 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451483117865 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.